Thank you both: Richard and Calliope for your beautiful words and I'm glad that you liked it. I have written it when my body was filled with inner peace, because of the spring's beauties and fragrance

pinksheep

18 years 2 months ago

It

suggests something more powerful to me than inner peace, i think it is extremely clever this poem, it strikes the psyche with chords dissonant and yet at the same time melodic, bringing the reader me into a state of blissful confusion-

Marius Surleac

18 years 2 months ago

you're right...

Yes, you are right - first I have described a biological phenomenon (photosynthesis) and then I made the connection beyond this scene of real life phenomenon, with my own being, with my own sensations. Thank you very much for your kind comment! Marius

pinksheep

18 years 2 months ago

Marius

So much thought went into this poem, your explanation has made me even more happily perplexed, you have taken me into a sublime blizzard of great dizziness and joy-sincerest regards

Marius Surleac

18 years 1 month ago

thank you...

Thank you again and I appreciate your visit. Cheers from Marius!

weirdelf

18 years ago

the comments say it all Marius

a complete intelligent success. Call me a snob but I love poetry that is clever as well as beautiful. cheers, Jess

Marius Surleac

18 years ago

Hi Jess!Thank you!Marius

Hi Jess! Thank you! Marius

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