Spring’s beautiful virus

Flowers caught by the eye –
sun scatters his arrows
in the heart of trees;
and leave in my body,
a forceful disease

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Region, Country: Romania, ROU

Comments

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Marius...

I get the fever too... love the short and strength of this... the title drew me in...and it fits so well... Richard

Calliope

17 years 11 months ago

Short and sweet.

Loved this.Very clever imagery. Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

Marius Surleac

17 years 11 months ago

Thank you both: Richard and Calliope for your beautiful words and I'm glad that you liked it. I have written it when my body was filled with inner peace, because of the spring's beauties and fragrance

pinksheep

17 years 11 months ago

It

suggests something more powerful to me than inner peace, i think it is extremely clever this poem, it strikes the psyche with chords dissonant and yet at the same time melodic, bringing the reader me into a state of blissful confusion-

Marius Surleac

17 years 11 months ago

you're right...

Yes, you are right - first I have described a biological phenomenon (photosynthesis) and then I made the connection beyond this scene of real life phenomenon, with my own being, with my own sensations. Thank you very much for your kind comment! Marius

pinksheep

17 years 11 months ago

Marius

So much thought went into this poem, your explanation has made me even more happily perplexed, you have taken me into a sublime blizzard of great dizziness and joy-sincerest regards

Marius Surleac

17 years 11 months ago