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Tija

Tija, mountain of ages,
Shrugs its shoulders about
The sky and presages
Discord and engages
Terror and outrages
Both within and without,
The minds of all sages.

In piercing moon and sun shine,
Through night and darkest day,
The shadows intertwine
Along the sharp decline
To smother and confine
And instill disarray,
Through every ill design.

Gloom, it flows like a disease,
Collected and refined,
With deadly expertise
And offhand treacheries
That bend the brow and knees
And leave the heart consigned,
To wither by degrees.

It's a sight to contemplate
From leagues of hope away,
Else misery await
That may never abate,
But shall incinerate
The profound interplay,
Of dreams and deadly fate.

— Pugilist, May 14, 2008

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Region, Country: Jacksonville area, FL, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Keats, Kipling, Carroll, Yeats, Tolkien, Shakespeare

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Jonathan Moore

Jonathan Moore

18 years ago

It's a mountain

Tija is the name of a mountain on Flat Earth, a place where I use as a locale for much of the poetry I write. --Jonathan Annoying the world, one person at a time (Group discounts available)
doorman

doorman

16 years 9 months ago

Jonathan

Just browsing through haphazardly. Very happy I stumbled upon this. It pulls the observation of Tija into a primordial void, of sorts,- human's universal wonder/fear of its' pre origin, compared with an ageless nature. This theme is not forced, but rather, hinted, through the emotions Tija invokes. I like a poem that respects the reader. No flaws in the structure, but then again I'm the wrong person to ask. The title is excellent,- thought Tija was a woman's name to begin with. Ambiguity is always a bonus. To me, a solid poem in all respects. Espen.