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Your poem says it all I know this place all to well not going to change anything about this one Chrys

This takes many into familiar territory Cat but the reservoir emptied by turning in on itself can become at least half-full when all your senses tingle with the thought of just being alive for another day and wondering what change it will bring. lol. Its a disturbing but very descriptive and accurate poem of the pit of depression we all struggle to climb out of from time to time. Cant see anything i would suggest changing. Always Keith

it suits my mood right now,you've said what i could not put to words. Lacy Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.

oh yes.. I can relate.. well written.. Richard

I have been There to the very pit and knocked on pergertory gates, the wounds heal but the scars stayed, I hope you have a better Day chin up my friend, Take care peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

What a great write, but I am sorry about what inspired it. Hope you're feeling better today. ~Jess ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Last night I lay in bed looking up at the stars in the sky and I thought to myself, where the hell is the ceiling??"

You wrote this well over a year ago and still it finds days to match up with , like mine , this suits my mood all too well ((HUG)) love Jayne x x x We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall ...