Dream Castles

This one is left hanging continue the thought see what develops so far I like it different for you Chrys

I was playing there only yesterday, my memory is not that bad. Nicely evocative, stands as it is, a piece of nostalgia, perhaps, as Chrys says, you could take it further. cheers, Jess

I enjoyed reading this one. Short but beautifully put together! Didn't think it took anything away from it

... a nice little picture of two little kids building sand castles together. Short-n-sweet. I liked it. ~Lynn (Jess K.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Last night I lay in bed looking up at the stars in the sky and I thought to myself, where the hell is the ceiling??"

Cat Love the opening, This could be great and i'm sure it will. Waiting patiently Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~

nostalgic

Love the revisions, Cat! ps: She doesn't have a name, yet, the dragon... ~Lynn (Jess K.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Last night I lay in bed looking up at the stars in the sky and I thought to myself, where the hell is the ceiling??"

better thanks Chrys

this takes me back to my last girlfriend, we used to go and explore old castles at night time, climbing over walls and gates in the dark it was our own little private dream world. I really liked. it reminded me also of the song 'castle on a cloud' from Les Miserables. especially with the childhood desires element. Thanks for such an evocative poem. Jacob

This is delightful and fresh, you always sweep me away for the poem, i leave and travel and come back feeling like i have been on a ride beautiful fantasy with a little childhood wove through it , I loved it another one I havent read but then I think I have a few to sort through yet lol love and biggest hugs Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...