Serenity #1 (fourth edit)

"Serenity #1" (fourth edit)

Whisper,

of places in your loving heart.

Naked,

against your dearest promises.

Wounded,

sensation of fresh heartache.

Benediction,

washes hope into healing.

Ceasing,

attempts to direct the uncontrollable.

Slowly,

flowing freedom from this

OBSTINATE

opposing will.

— Candlewitch, May 09, 2008

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Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more., Candlewitch

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Critiques

professor

18 years 1 month ago

Opposing will

Cat, such a deep and questioning poem. But you do have to listen to the whispers, promises and healing they will always be there no matter how obstinate you may be in opposing them. lol. Loved the poem. Keith

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

Thank you Keith, for the

Thank you Keith, for the comfort of your words, Always, Cat

Majeedahs_Umi

18 years 1 month ago

smile...

i loved your poem

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

Thank you Maj

for reading, I appreciate the comment. Always, Cat

Seren

16 years 11 months ago

Cat ...

You know me trolling about and I found this ... first off the name caught my eye and I thought serenity that was the screen name I wanted for here and thought to take a look.... its a gentle flow and easing through your words and they are so peaceful and beautiful I love them my friend cannot find fault Love it all .. Love Jayne x x

Candlewitch

16 years 11 months ago

Troll Away

to your heart's contentment, lol, it is most flattering! Thank you for your sweet comments, lovely Jayne! Love, cat