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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
May 09, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Love and Waterfalls

As I look into those eyes,
the sea roars ever loudly
drowning in desire

As passion moves beneath the core
underwater earthquakes,
form tsunamis of love

Like fallen meteors, bodies entwine
burning like fire
a pinnacle of bliss
— Barbara Writes, May 09, 2008

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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MeanderS

18 years 1 month ago

‘fallen meteors’!!! o

'fallen meteors'!!! o gud god...........this is simply awesome n truly awesome seems ur love Barbara!(smiles:>> i can feel the rapids riding in ma veins...n tsunamis fountaining the ins and corners of ma litlle heart! any1 wil feel it...that is the magic of ur love poem... looking f more.... thanks wishes..
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

18 years 1 month ago

Thanks Meander

Smiles:) Barbara Thanks for your comment Glad you like it so much. Love between two people is special and I hoped to describe the experience through words. This took a lot of work and time to write. glad you felt the magic. Thanks for reading. I change the title several time to make it as powerful as the poem without repetition. Looking for more------not sure how would continue. The moment is for a moment, though the experience last for ever.
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MeanderS

18 years 1 month ago

Love n waterfalls……..the

Love n waterfalls........the title sounds supremely romantic...an xplosion of fiery love..that soothes the raining sea of the hearts...hmmm..too gud ma'm.