I walk on

I like this, I too am waiting for those sheets of heavenly rain and the blessings they contain. Sincerely, Mark

For some reason, I really liked the first two lines. Good write, but everything seems a little crowded.... maybe break things up a little? ~Lynn (Jess K.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "If guns kill people, then I can blame mis-spelled words on my pencil.." - Larry the Cable Guy ~ "Driver carries less than $20 in remorse..."

This is quite beautiful...Great work on this one my dear... Smiles, Theresa

although i think you could make the imagery work even more powerfully for you. First off i would consider changing "lovely" for something more poignant. Then perhaps you might think about seeing the obstacles falling down into your path in the growing breeze as the first raindrops in an approaching storm. Then finally the blessings of heaven you refer to are also raindrops falling from the sky...i.e. both obstacles and positives come from the same skywards direction. Your image actually reminded me of "pennies from heaven". Anyway, just some thoughts for you. Also i think the passage below felt as if it was intending "conflate and share the obstacles..." so perhaps it should run as below. and there’s nothing in sight to conflate or to share the obstacles that drift and sway Keith

What a fitting title for this write Lacy,, The imagery is powerful as written.. I like the thought of being able to walk on with all the obstacles that may fall in your path... the end gives way to positive thoughts as you hold your head high ..knowing that you will be blessed.. indeed gives imagery of pennies from heaven .. a write in which I can relate and so a favorite.Bravo Lacy.. BrownEyesBlue