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May 07, 2008
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The Sun, You and Me (an intimate relationship)
A melting squirt of hot sun
on your hair treacles through
a filter of autumn leaves,
Ripe to be crunched by gravel teeth
Thus your hair bakes to
a cookie like heat
in the grasp of my seared fingers
is a perception of happiness.
Shall we look on each other
with shining eyes of warmth
and see a reflection
of eternal inner self?
But one day the leaves will crunch
under landscape's mortar and pestle.
on your hair treacles through
a filter of autumn leaves,
Ripe to be crunched by gravel teeth
Thus your hair bakes to
a cookie like heat
in the grasp of my seared fingers
is a perception of happiness.
Shall we look on each other
with shining eyes of warmth
and see a reflection
of eternal inner self?
But one day the leaves will crunch
under landscape's mortar and pestle.
Comments
Marius Surleac
18 years ago
real intimate...
goatman
18 years ago
Thanks dude!