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The Sun, You and Me (an intimate relationship)

A melting squirt of hot sun
on your hair treacles through
a filter of autumn leaves,
Ripe to be crunched by gravel teeth

Thus your hair bakes to
a cookie like heat
in the grasp of my seared fingers
is a perception of happiness.

Shall we look on each other
with shining eyes of warmth
and see a reflection
of eternal inner self?

But one day the leaves will crunch
under landscape's mortar and pestle.

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Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

18 years ago

real intimate...

Strong, sensitive, warm hearts and souls, sun shining upon these feelings, positive manner. Good job! Marius