Hurry Up And Wait (aka Tick, Tock)

Richard - Thanks so much for your comments. Time seems to be a big worry amongst people, so I thought I'd convey that worry. Mom - I like "Hurry Up and Wait," and will give it serious consideration. Peter - Thank you for your thoughts, I'm glad the point came across well. In general, I think I'll go with the general concensus that the title needs more work. What does everyone think of something like "Fixation?" Thanks for the votes and comments all! I'll revise this once there are more thoughs brought to the table - it's only been out a couple of days, so I'll give others a chance to comment before I go monkeying about. :~) ~Lynn (Jess K.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Bush is listening.... use big words!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine..."

I've scrapped 'Fixation' as it's a little too broad of a title. Torn now between 'Tick, Tock' and 'Hurry Up and Wait' - I'm kind of leaning towards the Hurry Up, as it follows the same point / counterpoint in general. Maybe will do that as the main one, and have (aka: Tick, Tock) what do you all think? Great suggestions, everyone! Thanks so much. :~) ~Lynn (Jess K.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Bush is listening.... use big words!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine..."

For not being able to respond properly in a timely manner. Jess - 'Pip Pip' has officially been added to my to read list. I liked your poem regarding time - very nicely put together. Cat - Worrying about time I think is a good little thing that everyone does, it's kind of why I chose to write about it. Amara - LOL! Exactly! When you want time to hurry up, it creeps. Trying to relax? Poof! There it goes! Mark - You've been officially incorporated into the new title :~) Mark (again) - Thanks for the support, buddy. :~) Jess - Glad you liked it, and thanks for the amusement of "listening" you try to twist your tongue to our south-western language, LOL! Janice - I'm glad you liked the poem. I changed the title to 'Hurry Up and Wait', so that the point/counterpoint theme resumed. Tried to throw a little Anthony Hopkins in there too, hence the 'tick tock, tick tock' line, and ultimately second title. ~Lynn (Jess K.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Bush is listening.... use big words!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine..."