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urge to merge

1.
The failure of muscle
to perform the last step [of glycolysis]
is a good thing, of course.
Alcohol is more toxic than lactic acid
and its presence in the cell would be
correspondingly more dangerous...
Muscle cells would have to discharge alcohol
into the blood stream
and the organism would quickly
get gloriously drunk
and then die.
--Isaac Asimov, 1962 (Life and Energy, p. 278)

2.
To that long-lost last glycolytic step,
Loss of which prevents our pickling
In our own alcohol,
I propose a toast!
And another, to muscle tissue!
And another, to... bones
For muscles to pull against
So that we can, for instance,
Lift things, thuch as... another glass!
(Did I thay "things thuch"??? Hahahaha!
I meant "things SUCH as another glath"...
Tho, here'th to... like... lactic athid...
And to, uh, to... thell di-fer-en-chee-A-shun...
And... uh, to... to the whole freaking evolution
Of multithellular freaking LIFE!!!

3.
after the party was over
i sat alone and was overcome
by the strangest urge
to merge or fuse with you
to mutually dissolve
into each other's atoms
as far past sex
as the heavens beyond earth

4.
would we could go back in time
when life was little more than slime
so i could be soup with you

5.
when we sleep
together
being ashes or dust
with you
will do

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Amaranthine

18 years ago

Poem

At first, I was struggling to see how Unleashing Intimacy reminded you of this - but then thought you teasing me - how I was following suit with a naughty poem because it was popular or allowed myself to be surrounded others who were getting "high on the moon" - which for the record I don't do - simply around those who choose to and in the music biz, to disassociate with potheads is to stop playing with most everyone in these parts. Anyway - it wasn't until I got to the "dissolving into one another" that I realized why you said that poem made you think of this one - yes - there is something intoxicating about meshing with another - beyond the physical - beyond the boundaries of explanation even. Would be wonderful to go back in time or back far enough in our own psyche we could unite without the need to impose restrictions - to mix our colors and create a new hue more beautiful than we can accomplish alone. The drunk lisp was funny, but it was the deeper verses that got my attention most of all. Sincerely, Amara
Rob Graber

Rob Graber

18 years ago

Yes Amara, you have

Yes Amara, you have expressed the connection very well I think; and the mixing of colors is a lovely way to express the urge to merge, a most poetic way that had not occurred to me before. Smearing one's color on another's insides is an image almost frightening for its strength... Thanks!
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Skumpfsklub

18 years ago

This one should do it for you, Rob

This is your 'credential poem,' so far as I'm concerned. I've enjoyed your other stuff a lot, but took it as 'excellent craft, framing a fine naturalist's wit.' This one marks you as the poet proper. It has that transcendent thing goin', you know? The macrocosm/microcosm deal? Atoms and oceans? The transferrable epiphany? All there. I'm your litmus, baby.
Rob Graber

Rob Graber

18 years ago

Thanks Very Much

Thanks very much indeed! I always must fight the suspicion that free verse is in some sense too easy. I know that the best free verse presupposes mastery of form, just as the best abstract visual art presupposes mastery of realism; but it also lets anything pass as poetry. And while it is relatively easy to evaluate formal verse, it is frustratingly difficult--for me--to evaluate free verse (my own as well as that of others).