Haiku

Very cute, I can just see the little guy running around with tiny leather patches on his knees. Always, Cat

The perils of carelessness, which of course is also the fountain from which fun and adventure springs, at least to the young. This little piece invoked that in me: and it was just a skinned knee, surely worth it for the fun had in the darting and the play. Well painted Haiku. My only critique would be a request for a comma or dash after the second line. Although the break is obvious, I think it would help in solidifying the theme. Alobar (Just my two cents, spend them on gum if you wish.)

Light and funny.. poor little guy. enjoyed your haiku.. Richard

Smiles:) Barbara guys skating boarding darting back and forth among stone garden path skin knees the guys call it fun lol:) beautiful haiku

Smiles:) Barbara I too appreciate your feedback also

reminds me of skinned knees while playing, alas I agree with Alobar, well worth a skinned knee to have some fun. Nice upbeat, cute.

Smiles:) Barbara Good Haiku enjoyed reading again. One suggestion, did you realize there was 6 syllables in the second line instead of 7. Other than that it is perfect

although a variation, still nice, Best Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~