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Now there's a poem about writers block; my hats off to you, seems that we are under the same moon today. Frost

This has to be the most descriptive and creative poem about writer's block I ever read. Great work moonman. Brilliant. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.

Very imaginative poem about a nasty subject. To me writer's block is a dirty word, lol. Great job! Always, Cat

See?! Yet another proven case that the sock gnomes and the underwear gnomes are in cahoots. Great theme, and it's something that can be appreciated by everyone (the writer's block and socks!) Just one stanza might need a little tiny bit of work: "A few pleasurable words, some enlightening view, or some new little rhyme so sexy it schmoooz…" For me just didn't have a nice even flow - something was hanging it up a little bit, and I can't quite put my finger on exactly what. Still and all, good job Richard! ~Lynn (Dwarfie) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Bush is listening.... use big words!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine..."

i enjoy your style of poetry more and more as i read you through the days a wonderful poem O

Nice piece on writer's block and mundane everyday stuff. Hope you get two socks and blessings from the Muse. Paul

two feet and one sock - I can picture you there - pondering over the poem or lack there of - I think most of us have been in a similar state. good show!

Great write Moon! Like the comparision~two feet, one sock! Thanks for sharing

Ah thank you Moon, for giving me a happy little smile before I turn in for the night. I have no critique, for none is required, I can mail you some socks though, if that'll help. Fun write. Alobar (Just my two cents, spend them on gum if you wish.)

that there might be a benefit to having only one foot. (See what the sock gnomes do with that!) Thanx, Chuck PS: On the other hand (or foot), there's the yardstick ... with three feet. Evidently one to spare for something or other.

I go away for a couple of days and you write an amazing poem only one problem second stanza last line I see what you mean but( and there always is one your word usage is choppy only an opinion all in all nice job on this one love the line two feet one sock good imagery there Chrys

Bet it's argyle. They never fit right anyway. Wear sandals and free those toes, when they see light, anything goes!!! Heheheh Great write, Richard. Enjoyed it thoroughly! GB-Kim