Terse verse #1

Will grief

be brief?

Refrain

of pain

again

a gain?

We'll see.

Won't we?

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Candlewitch

18 years ago

Yes, terse verse is right.

Yes, terse verse is right. For me it holds a mystery. Enjoyed. Always, Cat

Frost Smith

18 years ago

skumpfsklub...

Thought provoking.... Pain is the touchstone of growth; or so I'm told, however when I'm in the pain its hard to think that; just want it to be over, afterward I look back & learn from it. Frost

themoonman

18 years ago

We do..

short and strong.. Richard

weirdelf

18 years ago

Very clever

Grief's refrain in the face of helpful platitudes. Spot on. cheers, Jess