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Two Hearts

                                                                  Love is a godsend
                                                                      Love is a door
                                                         that hearts can pass through
                                                              to live twice than before.

                                                           They show love to a world
                                                          that while turning is strange.
                                                    knowing this,THERE IS NOTHING
                                                       that their hearts cannot change.

                                                        They know hearts can be cold
                                                         while their own will be kind....
                                                       but they know hearts that LOVE
                                                           will stand true for all time.

                                                     Two hearts are without question,
                                                           they will beat without fear.
                                                            they will find all their joy,
                                                     though their eyes will shed tears.

                                                          So as your heart is beating,
                                                        There is nothing it CAN'T DO.
                                                    to bestow the best gifts of true love,
                                                                        It takes two.
— JWwildcat2012, Apr 26, 2008

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Region, Country: Brownsville,KY USA

Favorite Poets: D. H Lawrence and Robert Frost

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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

James

this poem has a well known theme therefore it is up to you as the author to give it a new twist or see it in a different light as it stands it is all too common the repetition of the word love makes it a task to read I've read your other work and find that this is not one of your best but with some work you can re write it and bring it up to the standard of your others Chrys