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Calliope
Apr 30, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Midnight Princess Part II

I feel the pull
of your soul to mine
as you reach out to hold me
with your mind.
You feel the nudge
of my seeking spirit
I whisper soft words
and I know you hear it.
My heart sighs deeply
with your reply
As together
my Midnight Prince and I fly
on towards the moon
the stars so bright
lighting the way
for our midnight flight.

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C

Calliope

18 years ago

Thank you both

I still think it needs some tweeking or perhaps another verse or two,or maybe i'll leave it alone ,who knows,lol.I guess we'll all have to see,lol. Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
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DarkinAZ

18 years ago

Me Likey,

I love this poem! It reminds me of a beautiful dream. Sincerely, Mark
C

Calliope

18 years ago

Thank you both

for your comments.your very kind.I wasn't sure about the response i'd get on this one,wasn't too sure if i was done with it,still not, but it seems to be ok,lol. Thanks, Lacy, Where power corrupts,poetry cleanses.
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years ago

Hi Lacy

significantly simple and impressively enjoyable! Always, Cat
professor

professor

18 years ago

It's a lovely start Lacy

and with a soft and compelling tone. But i think you know it feels unfinished and there is surely more to come... so i look forward to its completion Just a small point i think it should be: "and I know you hear them". (plural if it is refering to "words") Your Proff