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Writers Block

Inspired by Frost Prevalence accepted structurally sound,aspirations rocked judgementally profound,life that is, that was - isn’t now, change ofthoughts reasons so confusingly unsound, Despaired contrived deprived by a lecherous mind,I titter and look back on words said, I’m tatteredthat confusion is all that has been bled, paper strewnbut still, this quill is frozen to the back of my head, Blatantly endlessly staring, to a canvas waiting to bedressed, oh god I’m feeling so depressed, pressuredby peers I want to impress, just trying to do one’s best,Meekly I say, nothing will be penned today, The world will have to wait just another day,for me to have my little say, mastered to the canvaswhich has haunted my past few days, forgive nowas I hang my head in such utter shame,  I’ve tried but failed to enlighten your day. 

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Frost Smith

Frost Smith

18 years ago

rider68....

Oh but you haven't failed; thank you, our community shares in a common experience; the good of what is poetry & the bad of everything else. Such is life but finding this site gives me another way to get through & cope. I appriciate you & all my other friends here on the site. Frost
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 11 months ago

Peter

I call bullshit on this one. No one suffering from writer's block can write up something this awesome. :~) Good job! ~Jess ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Last night I lay in bed looking up at the stars in the sky and I thought to myself, where the hell is the ceiling??"
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rider68

17 years 11 months ago

Hi and Thanks Lynn

This was on the back of Frost, having read one of his poems, i was inspired, it flowed out in 10-12mins, But all to soon forgotten, Thanks for bringing it back, Sorry had a very heavy week at work, very little time to post, Sad that no-one joined our little rant, Take care Lynn, Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Peter...

you write well for someone with writer's block.. impressive.. it needs a little tweaking.. maybe comma's or the presentation. but other than that.. in my old opinion anyway.. it is written by a writer without the block.. forgive now.. would it read better.. forgive me now..? enjoyed the read and thank you for being here.. this world will always need writers.. and on good days... we jot it down. Richard
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rider68

17 years 11 months ago

Sorry Richard

I did reply, But in haste couldn't have pressed the cofirm button, Yes i do agree this could do with slight adjustment to punc- when i have time will amend, Hope you are well Very Best regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~