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Echo's of the Ancients

As dawn rises up upon the mountains green
The light of day filters through the trees
A blue Grey mist moves slowly casting magical shadows
Within appear the great spirits, awake
They wander through the woods
Leaving their legacy of peace and harmony
Of being one with the earth and sky
remember, we walked the same pathways
We walked through those portals
those special doorways from one dimension to another
You can feel them, sometimes
they let you see them, hear them
Their sacred words and customs they impart
To those special few who understand
and live the way of peace and harmony
Silently the light  of day merges through the morning mist
Sunbeams dance in the morning light
A soft breeze flows gently, lifting the drifting mist
Casting magical shadows
Images appear from the ancient times
Our Astral Warriors travel the paths of time
These time portals open - Twixt twilight and dawn
— Electric Blue, Apr 25, 2008

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

18 years 1 month ago

Echo's

Beautifully written I actually felt I was there, for I love nature so, Thanks for sharing!
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MeanderS

18 years 1 month ago

‘Our astral warriors

'Our astral warriors travel the paths of time, these time portals open- twixt twilight an' dawn' is simply superb a line. 'twixt twilight an' dawn'-i jus wanto read these few words again n again...your poem lends an idyllic picture...n it tells how beautifully u hav captured the lovely nature in the charms of ur artistic brush. very natural n above all its jus too touchin.. for all nature lovers. sweet flow of words. all the v. best Your frend MeanderS.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 7 months ago

Echoes of the Ancients

MeanderS Hello my friend. Yes Twixt Twilight and Dawn are words that come to me often. When I am out driving or on the mountain when mist rises it is the times of magic. Where others are sound asleep missing the wonders of nature in the raw with the elements in their glory you become one so alive all senses are heightened. You see and hear for miles so clearly. I am glad you enjoyed my journey.