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Apr 22, 2008
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Common Intention
A smile hereA hello thereSimple amity knocks the doorOr romance to share His eyes praise her pretty faceYet, another game, the mind plays
The crow inside his brain crows,"She's an apple good to devour"
You shouldn't blame himShouldn't call him namesIt's a common weaknessCommon to most males When one very direct would get to the point, this one takes the long routewith his heart on a plateSugar coated bitter lies,advises and aids offered to the naive lass in syrupy ways. All tricks played with the common aim in mindJust to reach the finish lineall in good time
The crow inside his brain crows,"She's an apple good to devour"
You shouldn't blame himShouldn't call him namesIt's a common weaknessCommon to most males When one very direct would get to the point, this one takes the long routewith his heart on a plateSugar coated bitter lies,advises and aids offered to the naive lass in syrupy ways. All tricks played with the common aim in mindJust to reach the finish lineall in good time
— Nilmini, Apr 22, 2008
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themoonman
18 years 1 month ago
Hi Nilmini...
themoonman
18 years 1 month ago
I forgot..
Kailashana
18 years 1 month ago
hehehe. Great poem,
Nilmini
18 years 1 month ago
Richard & Kailashana,
goatman
18 years 1 month ago
Nilmini
Nilmini
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks Goat, :-)