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Apr 25, 2008
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Brute poem
I write toward some simple end
As friend who'd share his sense with friend
In simple scheme with simple rhyme,
My point direct in common time.
The Other knows me not so well
So if I have a thing to tell
The more of that and less of me
There is makes for efficiency.
'Transparent poem' might seem queer
But that's the ideal I hold dear.
The content matters, not the men
Or maids who wield observant pen.
What counts at last is what they took
Of what you captured in your look.
Comments
Majeedahs_Umi
18 years ago
I happen to like it....
Candlewitch
18 years ago
Hi Perry
Rolwright
18 years ago
Good Job
infinite_dwarf
18 years ago
Good stuff!
Skumpfsklub
18 years ago
A borrowed phrase, twisted
gumpymonkey
18 years ago
please think of the children!
Skumpfsklub
16 years 3 months ago
Just stickin’ another