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Brute poem

 

 

I write toward some simple end

As friend who'd share his sense with friend

In simple scheme with simple rhyme,

My point direct in common time.

 

The Other knows me not so well

So if I have a thing to tell

The more of that and less of me

There is makes for efficiency.

 

'Transparent poem' might seem queer

But that's the ideal I hold dear.

The content matters, not the men

Or maids who wield observant pen.

 

What counts at last is what they took

Of what you captured in your look.

 



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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years ago

Hi Perry

I like everything about this poem... the rhythm and pacing are wonderful. Keep up the good work! Always, Cat
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Rolwright

18 years ago

Good Job

You got it,hope more see what you were trying to say.Stay on track.
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

18 years ago

Good stuff!

I like this one, Perry. It has a nice flow to it. Just curious on how you came about "Brute Poem" for a title? ~Lynn (Dwarfie) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Bush is listening.... use big words!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine..."
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Skumpfsklub

18 years ago

A borrowed phrase, twisted

A borrowed phrase, twisted to fit a different context. The original phrase was 'brute reality,' taken from a discussion of 'socially constructed objects.' A poem written is the 'brute poem' of the poet; the poem read is the 'brute poem' of the reader. 'A good poem' (or 'bad poem') is the social construction we do here. I'm uneasy about the ontological status of 'good poetry,' as you might imagine. I declare my preference for poetry that is efficient, transparent, and as nearly 'objective' as poetry can get. I might have done some violence to the meaning of the original phrase--but, hey, English is my tongue, too. I'm allowed to bend it a bit, and I'm correspondingly indulgent of that practice by others.
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gumpymonkey

18 years ago

please think of the children!

http://web.mala.bc.ca/davies/H482.WWI/poster.US.DestroyThisMadBrute.jpg Perry is trying to free peoples minds! Stop him. -Daniel