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Kailashana
Kailashana
Apr 21, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Veil of Fire

In the river goddess of Fire,
near the sacred Water flame,

I cross the last burning bridge
between
the deathless torch of Heaven
and these tiger claws of earth,

Samurai daughter of violet moon.




— Kailashana, Apr 21, 2008

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Emmanuel Moore

18 years 1 month ago

It's Poetic

Wow a previous life, that's cool I guess that's why your so brave and noble.Maybe I'll try writing something today, It seems you've inspired the inspiree to put together something inspirational.Thank you inspirer Much Thanks
Kailashana

Kailashana

18 years 1 month ago

you are

you are wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too funny, are you waxing or waning? hmmmm? Actually, I do hear weird sounds, see strange images. Must be my bicameral mind;-) de nada. ~a