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Apr 24, 2008
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a rag on sin
ack!
once the toothpaste voids from
tube, it comes too hard to cram it
back ...
---barbsdad
[o]ur systems, perhaps, are nothing
more than an unconscious apology
for our faults---a gigantic scaffolding
whose object is to hide from us [the
fact of] our favorite sin
---Amiel
oh! such a ruttled din
we make of inner storm
and stress throughout within
so by our toxic, noisome sin
against ourselves ... and so
against our far and near
of gentle kin
in point of fact, sin has nothing
at all to do with christianity, god,
any and all religions ... or even
run-of-the-mill spirituality
---barbsdad
(kin in this context = the human
species and other animals
sin = offense/betrayal against/of
self and others)
Comments
Xenia
18 years ago
HI
barbsdad2003
18 years ago
Thanx ...