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Lightly tethered verse

A melody is in the words you speak

And melody itself is like a word

Indeed the word that everyone will hear

Aesthete and villain, child and sage, the same

The nose forgot giraffes beneath the pond

And who among us doubts that she was right?

 

The rhythm finds where reason's wall is weak

A Trojan horse concealing thoughts absurd

A soothing voice to calm a savage fear

The subtle introduction to a game

Mere verbal ploy to hook up with some blonde

As bitter pills are swallowed with delight

 

So when I can, I give my words a tweak

It doesn't matter if some meaning's blurred

I only need to draw the quarry near

Come, Moth, I'm masquerading as your flame

I promise visions from the realms beyond

A band of crystal camels is in flight.


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Skumpfsklub

18 years ago

Semi-sorta so

I'd noticed that some women were quite vulnerable to certain natural speech rhythms. I could hardly avoid noticing: I'd thought I was discussing the development of armored fighting vehicles as a thing amenable to analysis from a synthesized Darwinian/Lamarckian perspective when two young women climbed into my lap to seize my lips with their teeth. I was momentarily nonplussed. But I got the message.
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MeanderS

18 years ago

your poem seems to me like

flowing...a carefree stream content in itself, yet never content; searching, snaking. liked it. really nice. 'a band of crystal camels is in flight'-magnificent line. al da best!
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Liamb

18 years ago

this meanders through the

this meanders through the readers mind and opens all kinds of imagery. A really enjoyable read, thanks for sharing Liamb
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Skumpfsklub

16 years 11 months ago

Faux comments

have the virtue of putting the thing back in the stream. Of course it smacks of cheating, but I shan't let that stop me. I reckon, though, that if I don't occasionally thrust myself under your nose, you'll overlook the magnificence that is me.