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Electric Blue
Electric Blue
Apr 19, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Soulmates in time

We met long ago
in ages past
through the
interlacing of time

Universes
have come and gone
and again
our paths cross
we meet

But our love
is never ending
it is for
time immemorial

While the sun shines
the earth turns
we will be
part of the
cosmos
— Electric Blue, Apr 19, 2008

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Amaranthine

18 years 1 month ago

Innerselves

I like how you demonstrate the interconnection between each of us - as if we are woven into one fabric and our innerselfis a universe as well. We are tiny universes filled with many planets,stars, black holes, comets, suns, etc - there is an inner rhythm and science about us as well as mystery. I admire how you remind us of our rotation and passing of each other - we are particles of an even larger galaxy. Great job!
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 6 months ago

Soulmates

Hello my freind. You have understood the connection but the power of our inner soul gets connected seldomly with another to the depths were you disolve completely. Lots of people talk about the universal space re the cosmos but the cosmos within is so powerful
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purplemoondoll

18 years 1 month ago

Yes I like this. It’s

Yes I like this. It's simply stated and flows beautifully. You 'took me there'. There's just one typo I can see imemorial should read immemorial? I like the title. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

18 years 1 month ago

Soulmates

Hi Kaz Thank you. Yes i did not think about what to write it just flowed and with my love in mind it is just the unbelievable connection when you can let go so freely no one in control just is - beautiful beyond compare to anything
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

18 years 1 month ago

Soulmates

Hi keith i love your words Immutable timelessness of space - it is a space you cannot choose to go it just happens with the right soul
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

18 years 1 month ago

Soulmates

Hi Paul I am glad to have taken you on my journey and i hope you have experienced such desire pleasure gentleness another universe you long to go to again
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 9 months ago

Soulmates

Smiles:) Barbara Inner selves i love how you wrote this. I can feel the connection of love here as a cosmos of friends connect among poets. Its not your intended theme, but I enjoyed the read as the word cosmos took me there, great write.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

17 years 7 months ago

Soulmates in time

Barbara My soulmate in time owns my heart. but i do feel people forget the inner cosmos,universe within us all. I am glad you were able to connect electricblue.