The Transition of Souls

Time reflecting of loves passed by, thoughts reminiscing moments which were cast to stone, pubescence had barely lost its hold, you strippedthe camouflage and boyish soul, naked we staredplanning for times when age would behold. I’m lavishing remembering, the intimacy, therawness of our youth, the spillage of words -moans uttered, at the height of our impassionateembrace, how I long to milk the love that you gave,and to be laid, to be subdued, by your presence again, I’m standing before you baring my soul, butalas without you, I’m alone and so very cold,my veins drained of your passion, my eye’s –clouded by your cruel murderous demise,the bringer of death stole both our lives’ Please forgive me I well up inside;… thoughtsracing through my mind, it’…s just you lying-there, entombed, for all time, years apart haveplagued my mind, this world; … holds no placefor my broken soul, so tonight I come prepared;…. Forgive my love, but my patience has died,“And no” I leave no-one behind, I want to liedown and cuddle to your side, death will be ablissful thankful release, so hush now, as I raisethis challis and sip gratefully, knowing I will - Finally be at piece, and yes soon, we will be ableTo embrace all the years that have been denied,Help me my darling as I pass over to your side,I tire, the light fades, I hold a rose and awaitYour embrace…………………………..

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poewriter58

18 years ago

Peter

a title How about something like The transition Of Souls minor correction To embrace all the years that have been denied Reading this work just sent chills through me Chrys

rider68

18 years ago

Thanks Chrys

As per Normal, Great help and Great idea's, I will amend, I hope it conveyed well, as it tried my patience, trying to keep the tone and theme believable, The heading you suggest is more fitting than the one that i came up with, Thanks again Very Best Regards Peter

poewriter58

18 years ago

Peter

Thank you for using my suggestion it is a wonderful piece and the time and effort you have given to this poem shows Chrys

Candlewitch

18 years ago

Peter

This poem brought tears to my eyes. Very passionate write. Love the title. I can't pick a favorite line or lines as they are all great. Always, Cat

rider68

18 years ago

Cat Your words mean so much-Thank you

I must say, For me i am pleased with this, But for the fact that i have only played at penning moments, Having by chance finding this great community, It has made me look very closely -At myself as a person, and the realization that we are all capable of much more, given the right prompting and the want to improve, To be in company of such nice people and the sharing of a common interest is very- humbling, Thank you for your support, Sorry i get carried away- I tend to shy away from giving critique as I suffer from a mild form of Dyslexia, whilst i try to read so many postings, There are people better placed to give more informed opinions, Once again thank you for your continued support....and to Chrys. Peter

Candlewitch

18 years ago

Peter

You are not alone, I too, am slightly dyslexic. I reverse letters and numbers all the time. I read slowly so as to offset this annoying problem. Always, Cat

muttering_madwoman

18 years ago

feel

this has a very strong feel, the longing, the sadness, the reaching and hope for peace and resolution. nicely done N

rider68

18 years ago

Hi Niki

Thanks so much for stopping by, I know not the greatest of subjects, But just had to go with the flow, From your comments it seems that i have achieved the moment, Thanks again Best Regards Peter