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Apr 16, 2008
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Nature
A floating carpet
beneath my feet
as each dawn
the sun we greet
As each breath
we all must take
as twilight ends
at daybreak
The mist must rise
to kiss the sun
awake from silence
another day begun
The birds break the silence
herald the dawn
their joyful singing
awakes the morn
These lingering moments
captured in time
lasting forever
until the end of time
As life hurries onwards
people rush by
not seeing or hearing
what's before their eyes
beneath my feet
as each dawn
the sun we greet
As each breath
we all must take
as twilight ends
at daybreak
The mist must rise
to kiss the sun
awake from silence
another day begun
The birds break the silence
herald the dawn
their joyful singing
awakes the morn
These lingering moments
captured in time
lasting forever
until the end of time
As life hurries onwards
people rush by
not seeing or hearing
what's before their eyes
— Electric Blue, Apr 16, 2008
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Critiques
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
really good imagery
Electric Blue
18 years 1 month ago
NATURE
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
You are welcome friend