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An Unholy Alliance or We Three Are One

Poem 1

I am centre stage
I am violent rage
when I am ignored
and I will give a mighty roar
turning the airwaves dark
with my discontent
as my big ego bullies
all the innocent  
on my way to the centre 
of what I believe is 
the bullseye of attention
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Poem 1a

you are found by opening your eyes
violence because of your frustration
is not the wise choice
you must control your inner lion
and not show your immaturity
otherwise your fire will be consumed
and you will lash out at the innocent
because you have succumed to the "I"
and believe your false reality
and in this place you will fade to nought
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Poem 1b

focusing your attention upon me
helps me to reduce my anger
when I am ignored
otherwise my ego will roar
long and loud and so proud
for my vanity travels well
and I will cause much harm
on my way to were I will be
worshipped by the easily led
for I will be their graven Idol
and their daily Holy Bread

(C)2008 Lenny Gazbowski
 

— Lenny of Cohen, Apr 15, 2008

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themoonman

themoonman

18 years 1 month ago

Hi Lenny..

easing the roar of the beast...I liked it..be looking for the other two... Richard
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purplemoondoll

18 years 1 month ago

All three are great but I

All three are great but I think I like the last the best. Excellent Lenny as always! Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 1 month ago

A must read out loud poem

the association is clear but so well separated.Doing this in parts works well for effect. In ink, dabbler ps in the center everything rest awaiting pressure from other forces reacting to those pushing.
RSScheerer

RSScheerer

18 years 1 month ago

Lenny

You have painted a complete picture by posting all three as one. The end result is stronger potency. Watch that lion's claws, though. My favorite is the second of the three, that attempt to control the inner turmoil. Perfectly described. Ronda
Mark

Mark

18 years 1 month ago

Whew !

This roars and reads like mad ! Power packed poetry ! Love it ! Mark
LC

Lenny of Cohen

18 years 1 month ago

Appreciate

all your comments. Glad you enjoyed the read as I wondered whether it would work. Lenny "smile with each heartbeat"
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 12 months ago

It works

Even to the extent that the sum of the 3 is greater than the parts. I like the ambiguity in this, you create a powerful impression of the dangerous beast e all know, whether we recognise it or not. cheers, Jess