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Apr 15, 2008
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The Love Trail
He comes home from work
to his quiescent beauty
fast sound asleep upon her bed
With soft whispers, gentle caress
he awakes her from her slumber
They walk the trail of paradise
hand in hand enjoying the trees
and flowers along the way
A pond just ahead in view
standing in his arm
they watch the birds fly above
The turtles pop his little head
the swan buried his beak
under flowing sapphire waters
Standing in his arm
he softly kisses her neck
watching the sunset on the other side
A special place of healing
from a long tiresome day
shut up in the house
— Barbara Writes, Apr 15, 2008
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Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
I don’t understand the
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks Cat
Tink
18 years 1 month ago
i liked this one very much.
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
Thank you tink