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Apr 15, 2008
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Sensual
A gentle kiss,a tender touch
A warm breath on the neck
of smooth moist lips as they find their mark
awakened nerve ends start to spark
as the fire flickers, red embers start to glitter
this warm glow awakens the heart
this tidal wave takes you to the heights
Eruptions occurs, nothing can stay if flight
surging onwards forever flows
within its power forever grows
to each nerve making them glow
these lingering moments everlasting flow
A warm breath on the neck
of smooth moist lips as they find their mark
awakened nerve ends start to spark
as the fire flickers, red embers start to glitter
this warm glow awakens the heart
this tidal wave takes you to the heights
Eruptions occurs, nothing can stay if flight
surging onwards forever flows
within its power forever grows
to each nerve making them glow
these lingering moments everlasting flow
— Electric Blue, Apr 15, 2008
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Critiques
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
I like this
Electric Blue
18 years 1 month ago
Sensual
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
I enjoyed very much
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
Hello Maggie
Electric Blue
18 years 1 month ago
Sensual
professor
18 years 1 month ago
Sparking nerves
Lonnie
17 years 6 months ago
Very nice, Maggie!
Electric Blue
16 years 5 months ago
sensual