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Sensual

A gentle kiss,a tender touch
A warm breath on the neck
of smooth moist lips as they find their mark
awakened nerve ends start to spark
as the fire flickers, red embers start to glitter
this warm glow awakens the heart
this tidal wave takes you to the heights
Eruptions occurs, nothing can stay if flight
surging onwards forever flows
within its power forever grows
to each nerve making them glow
these lingering moments everlasting flow
— Electric Blue, Apr 15, 2008

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Electric Blue

Electric Blue

18 years 1 month ago

Sensual

Hi Barbara I hope you enjoyed the journey as it is a moment to long for the anticipation of what is t come or just to enjoy the innocence of the unknown
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

Hello Maggie

The rhythm is good and the language fluid. I can identify with the theme. A good read. Always, Cat
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

18 years 1 month ago

Sensual

Hi Cat I am sure we have all has this moment of true innocense of being awoken truely with another spirit the anticipation of the unknown journey
professor

professor

18 years 1 month ago

Sparking nerves

As a Neuroscientist i appreciate the image of the sparking nerves Maggie. lol. Its a simple but moving depiction of progression into a lasting love. Keith PS There are a couple of minor errors that need correcting: Should be "eruptions occur" and "within its power"
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Lonnie

17 years 6 months ago

Very nice, Maggie!

Again, the sesuous poet's soul comes through in your wonderful poem!
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 5 months ago

sensual

hello lonnie/Chrys Thank you for looking in on my poem I sink my heart and soul all my feelings happy and sad into my written words as they flow ever onwoard as an endless stream with no destination just stopping here and there and see where it leads always Electric Blue