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Haiku - snooze beneath landscapes

Haiku - snooze beneath landscapes

Look becoming wiped –
wind blows stardust from the sky
straight to the eyelash!

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Region, Country: Romania, ROU

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purplemoondoll

18 years ago

Welcome to the site

Great structure and imagery. I like the wind blowing stardust - beautiful. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Kaz It's impossible to smile on the outside without feeling better on the inside.
Marius Surleac

Marius Surleac

18 years ago

Thank you Kaz!

I appreciate your kind comment! Indeed we have to be positive inside our souls and mind to express the same feeling outside. Thank you again and I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem! Have a nice day! Marius
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Alobar

18 years ago

A poem of awe at the

A poem of awe at the night-sky's brilliance and incomprehensibility. Well done. The title seems a little less than the poem deserves, brings up more of a pastoral scene for me, than the infinite. But the poem is perfect Haiku. Alobar (Just my two cents, spend them on gum if you wish.)
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 9 months ago

what I love abut this is

that it satifies the requirements of haiku, philosophically, while lending a distinctly western viewpoint cheers, Jess