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Apr 14, 2008
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Going Banana
Let’s run away
where would we go?
To the other side of the sun
Lets play hide and seek
where would you hide?
Behind the bushes beneath the sunset
I am tired let’s sleep
where would you slumber?
In the heart of the earth
The sun
the sunset
the earth
why these?
The sun has the smile I need
the sunset hold the happiness I feel
the earth is where I am no more
The banana every one slips on
— Barbara Writes, Apr 14, 2008
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Critiques
Mark
18 years 1 month ago
This is cool
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks Mark
LadyTheresa
56 years 5 months ago
Good poem!
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks Theresa