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Apr 13, 2008
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Day and Night
The day is warm
a still calmness is in the air
the sun lazing above
peaceful serentiy all around
A day to travel
with no place to go
to wander endlessly
let time flow
The breeze sweeps gently
across my face
The warmth of the sun
gives me inner grace
The breeze ripples through
the leaves in the trees
making one flowing movement
like waves in the sea
This continuous flow
all with one mind
the togetherness of nature
all in time
As shadows fall, illusions take form
this transformation eludes the dawn
This definite outline of each form
it looks so different at dusk and dawn
a still calmness is in the air
the sun lazing above
peaceful serentiy all around
A day to travel
with no place to go
to wander endlessly
let time flow
The breeze sweeps gently
across my face
The warmth of the sun
gives me inner grace
The breeze ripples through
the leaves in the trees
making one flowing movement
like waves in the sea
This continuous flow
all with one mind
the togetherness of nature
all in time
As shadows fall, illusions take form
this transformation eludes the dawn
This definite outline of each form
it looks so different at dusk and dawn
— Electric Blue, Apr 13, 2008
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purplemoondoll
18 years 1 month ago
I like the soft irregular
Electric Blue
18 years 1 month ago
day and night
Calliope
18 years 1 month ago
I have to agree with Kaz
professor
18 years 1 month ago
The calm tranquility
Electric Blue
18 years 1 month ago
day and night
dbaker
18 years 1 month ago
Lovely images
Electric Blue
18 years 1 month ago
day and night