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Somone Told Me

Someone told me as many times
Someone told me, true love will find you
Someone told me, we weren't meant to be
Someone told me i will find, my true love in due time!

Someone told me I will find him
Someone told me to be kind of him
Someone told me never to be against
and to always stand tall

                                      This is what someone
                                                       told me!!!
— andrew, Apr 12, 2008

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Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, William Butler Yeats, Robert Frost, Maya Angelou, Henry David Thoreau

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themoonman

themoonman

18 years 1 month ago

Hi Layla...

Welcome to Neopoet..I could see where the poem was going..but the repeating of someone told me is distracting to the reader. My advice to you would be to read the poetry on this site and anywhere else you can..keep writing it down.. Richard