DREAMS

Take me to a place unseen
Lead me to my hearts desire
beyond the realm of my dreams
untouched by time

I float in clouds
the only sound heard
is the echo of my heartbeat

No sense of reality
I wander tirelessly
beyond the stars
the pulse of life
beats on

I travel to a place
where only nature lives
untouched by man

Where trees and water meet
entwined above and below
So calm so silent this
image of solitude of
natures force as
it was created

Unison reflected all around
as light falls where
sun and moonlight
streams through
from above

— Electric Blue, Apr 12, 2008

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Country/Region: GBR

Critiques

professor

18 years 1 month ago

Healing Nature

I go out and just immerse myself in Nature whenever i am stressed or troubled....and just to enjoy. Your poem captures the extreme calm and beauty of benevolent Nature very well Maggie. It can be rather like a day-dream. You had some typos etc in a few lines: "To float on clouds" (usually "on" rather than "in") "the pulse of life beats on" "To travel to a place" and in the final verse have sunlight and moonlight makes the line rather too long for the flow so how about: "where sun and moon-light" Hope you are out there taking some walks in the spring sunshine too. Keith

Electric Blue

17 years 8 months ago

dreas

In dreams.

professor

18 years 1 month ago

Dawn

You have my sympathy Maggie and crime does tend to reach its peak come closing time doesn't it? There is always the dawn though if you are not too exhausted. That almost never fails to lift my spirits. Keith

Electric Blue

16 years 5 months ago

Dreams

Keith Well lucky you dreams have come true and I hope you are both happy As for me the wall flower always waiting trying to motivate myself No one can take this special time away this magic time where I am called by mother nature to participate in my wandering and tune in to the messages That I am priviledged to receive and like a magnet I am drawn to the ocean again and again. It seems to be my calling in this life always Blue

Electric Blue

18 years 1 month ago

closing tim

Hi Professor Well crime does not stop not matter the time or day of the year but thats life. As for me i love to drive home at this time often i can be the only one around. The night air is cool and beconing,I see the moon above i am chasing it over the tree tops in front of me but i never ever catch up. The different phases the glow and misty haze surrounds it and i drift off - my mind racing as is the moon. The air of the night so cool and beconing a magic time twixt twilight and dawn. Sometimes i just continue to drive through country lanes down to the coast where i am called by the ocean. This is a brilliant time. Not a soul about you hear the waves lapping the shore i go down to the beach only to find the sand is so smooth washed clean by the waves - no foot prints but mine Ha! The air so clear the moon so bright but there is only me. The i return home when every one is getting up unknown to them of the magic they failed to see in my twilight zone.