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Bittersweet
she laughs to hide her pain
she won't let you see her hurt again
she learned through the years, not to trust
go ahead, and mock her, if you must
he drinks to hide his sorrow
reluctant to face tomorrow
he wonders what it is that he can't see
and he cries, oh what is the meaning of me
where do you go to hide
this pain you feel inside
and you cannot find a friend
who'll stick by you to the end
life is bittersweet, cause you see it
in the eyes of all the people you meet
It seems they've all lost their way...
and no one knows anymore, what to say
why do people lie...
and laugh when you cry
no feeling in their souls...
it takes work to be whole
nothing matters anymore...
my heart's so empty, it's sore
so what if you hate me...
Just get away, and let me breathe
you won't get near this time
go away, get out of my life
next time, you better look behind you
when you come after me with your knife
where do you go to hide
this pain you feel inside
and you cannot find a friend
and you feel the sadness'll never end
life, my friend, is bittersweet,
it angrily roams the dirty streets
looking for someone to destroy
twisting itself like a broken toy
yeah, life is bittersweet, cause you see it
in the eyes of all the people that you meet
it seems we've all lost our way
and we don't have anything else to say
it seems we've all lost our way
and we don't have anything left to say
Catherine M. Howell
4/11/08
Critiques
purplemoondoll
18 years 1 month ago
The emotion and strength of
wolfycat
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks...
IKnowNoBox
18 years 1 month ago
The lyrical touch is noticable
wolfycat
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks, Dabbler...
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
Really good
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
Really good
wolfycat
18 years 1 month ago
:)
Barbara Writes
18 years 1 month ago
Smiles:) Barbara
wolfycat
18 years 1 month ago
sorry guys...
weirdelf
18 years ago
LOL, you're allowed to vote for yourself. And you deserve it.
wolfycat
18 years ago
Hello Jess...