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Apr 10, 2008
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Tears and a thorn
Tears and thorn
My eyes are shedding tears
to expose the pain of my heart
That pain hinders my glee and
it apposes my routine walks
The sun and a new rose flower
seem to be dull and pale
The sky and earth are not in usal gay
cause this poet's pain
My hand and fingers deny to write,
though a poem is bursting to come out
The east and west are not clear
cause of my wague vision of tears
Sweets have lost it's taste and
my tongue too have forget it's ............
All these have happened
cause i have beaten my son
It is a thorn pinches my heart and
that blood drops write these lines
Sakthi S.Ravichandran
My eyes are shedding tears
to expose the pain of my heart
That pain hinders my glee and
it apposes my routine walks
The sun and a new rose flower
seem to be dull and pale
The sky and earth are not in usal gay
cause this poet's pain
My hand and fingers deny to write,
though a poem is bursting to come out
The east and west are not clear
cause of my wague vision of tears
Sweets have lost it's taste and
my tongue too have forget it's ............
All these have happened
cause i have beaten my son
It is a thorn pinches my heart and
that blood drops write these lines
Sakthi S.Ravichandran
— SAKTHEEE2007, Apr 10, 2008
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Critiques
Skumpfsklub
18 years 1 month ago
Language needs work, but there's a poem here
weirdelf
18 years ago
I have never struck a child, Shakthee,