Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
stay
The stories say that life flashes before our eyes as death covets us.
But what becomes of those who are loathe to respond to death's desire?
It is possible that a new world invites them into its realm
while those present during that final moment
assume roles in an altered tale.
Trapped in limbo and haunted by psychic warnings,
disoriented souls are hurled into a world
scattered with intermittent recollections and eerie probabilities.
Wandering through clouded time
where moments are predicted before they evolve;
invisible boundaries weaving an intricate paradox
where simple truth was once implied.
There is an instant when a life is offered an alternate conclusion;
stay and twist reality, or follow death, leaving time intact.
Those who cheat death, even briefly, absorb witnesses -
creating a dent in the universe, the skip of a heartbeat, a halting of clocks.
Yet when the dying finally accept their fate
each observer will carry a piece of that memory
until the moment they are confronted with their own death
caught between two worlds, forced to choose and remember.
Critiques
IKnowNoBox
18 years 2 months ago
Invisible boundaries weaving an intricate paradox
Candlewitch
18 years 1 month ago
The editor may be tough but