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Electric Blue
Electric Blue
Apr 09, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Chasing the Unknown

I am chasing the unknown
The wind rushing
past my ears
so fast
My heart pounds
out of my chest

But i ride
the rhythm
of the crest
of the wave
that is you

But it will
always
be
yesterday

Yesterday
will always
be today
— Electric Blue, Apr 09, 2008

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professor

professor

18 years 2 months ago

Riding the wind

And there is always tomorrow Maggie that is neither yesterday nor a today filled only with yesterday's. I felt your butterfly spirit riding through this one until the somewhat bleak outlook of its ending. I would not change a thing in the poem and hope the butterfly keeps riding the wind and sees another destination other than yesterday. Keith
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Chasing the unknown

Keith For you all your tomorrows came true so now you live in today forever I am happy for you and yours but for me I am still in the inbetween of no where land At lease you have someone who wants to be with you. I have no one? always Electric blue