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Apr 12, 2008
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Dying Moments
To the bedroom they gathered,Friend’s family, silently standing,Satin silhouetting a once proud man, Tears orchestrated, by his chosen favoured tunes,Chorused with muted tones, of humble sobbing,Drapes letting by; Ambers of shimmering light, Disquietly the gathered, shared in recapturingMemorable times, being looked upon;By Surgeons monitoring vital signs, Timely respectfully, with heads bowed,Affairs spoken and finalized; slowly;One by one; exit’s their way out, Quietly forward from the diminished crowed,A hand stretches out, fingers mingle,Heads turning - eyes find focus, becoming locked, ‘You came’ he utters, and she just smiled, Surgeons fiddle to monitors,Which are now picking up a beat,Tubes pulsing pushing blood, this rekindles,Once silken skin; to colour, a pinkish red, Silently lovingly their thoughts exchange,She whispers ‘Darling’ take me, ride me,Let me see you through; too Heavens gate;Then I will rest, while you walk through, Succumbed, he smiled; Hands entwined, she guides,Offering her breasts for him to explore –For that one - last time, dancing out memories,Lovingly; she roll's out, - her lover's desire,As his Life - quietly ebbed by, 12th April 2008
Comments
Candlewitch
18 years ago
Allot of emotions expressed
rider68
18 years ago
Thanks Cat
purplemoondoll
18 years ago
Tricky Subject
rider68
18 years ago
Yes I have to Agree