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Apr 05, 2008
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Zen Detritus
if every crumb was placed back together
to recreate a cracker
pasted near as new
would we take notice?
a bag of busted pieces clutched in tight
to project security
glued to your person
will anybody scrutinize?
rubbish set off to one side in stacks too high
to create rich compost
rotten around us
can it be smelled?
to recreate a cracker
pasted near as new
would we take notice?
a bag of busted pieces clutched in tight
to project security
glued to your person
will anybody scrutinize?
rubbish set off to one side in stacks too high
to create rich compost
rotten around us
can it be smelled?
— IKnowNoBox, Apr 05, 2008
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Critiques
Mark
18 years 2 months ago
oh yea
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
I also not sure of what you are getting at.
gumpymonkey
18 years 1 month ago
a sequoia chokes on cutting
IKnowNoBox
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks Daniel