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Apr 09, 2008
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In the Public Bathroom This Morning
Next to me, an old man, his fingers yellowed and brown.
I hear him wheeze,
Polypropylene serpent slithering to his nose
Supplying breath and life,
It seems more a leash to me, an unwanted restraint.
I wonder briefly at the path that brought him here
And am ashamed that I judge;
Ashamed for we all have our vices
And have made our mistakes.
We finish together and I hold open the door for him;
He graciously thanks me
And exits down the hall,
Cart-wheels squeaking,
Their mournful cry filling my hollowed-out soul.
I exit subdued and diminished.
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I hear him wheeze,
Polypropylene serpent slithering to his nose
Supplying breath and life,
It seems more a leash to me, an unwanted restraint.
I wonder briefly at the path that brought him here
And am ashamed that I judge;
Ashamed for we all have our vices
And have made our mistakes.
We finish together and I hold open the door for him;
He graciously thanks me
And exits down the hall,
Cart-wheels squeaking,
Their mournful cry filling my hollowed-out soul.
I exit subdued and diminished.
***************
Comments
poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
alobar
Alobar
18 years 1 month ago
It’s just a little piece,
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
mmm subdued and dimished?
Alobar
18 years 1 month ago
I wrote the poem quickly