Spaces between Spaces

How can I speak of your greatness to me
when all I have of you is moments
Those gaps in sequential order
rain drops falling in space
oceans of time to me
but how to explain
a life's loving
to another
not living
inside of
my own
world
?

-DS Baker

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Mark

18 years 1 month ago

Not sure

I think ya need to at least have a look inside. Great form ! Mark

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

How indeed to explain the

How indeed to explain the unexplainable? Great style and presentation. Always, Cat

dbaker

18 years 1 month ago

Very nice of you..

Thank you both for your comments and most of all taking the time to post a comment. -DS Baker

Starlight

18 years ago

hey cuz

Spaces between Spaces... have you ever known a more beautiful light? greatness moments gaps falling time explain loving another, living inside luv u and what you do, Stephanie

themoonman

18 years ago

Hi dbaker..

the form drew me in to the read.. very nice. We do try to find the words to explain... Richard

dbaker

18 years ago

Rain falling...

Funny how often we need to explain or justify our love. If any of you have ever been on the prairie when a storm is passing through, then you will recognize the cloud pattern or maybe my attempt at capturing the rain in the gust front as it passes by. Stephanie. Love you. Give hugs to the Nina's from me. -DS Baker