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andrew

Apr 03, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

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test of revision

(revised)

— andrew, Apr 03, 2008

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Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, William Butler Yeats, Robert Frost, Maya Angelou, Henry David Thoreau

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18 years 1 month ago

Brilliant use of the untyped word!

I have never seen anyone quite so eloquent with the space bar. Poetic typography takes a leap forward!

17 years 10 months ago

Actually

I think the use of parentheses is much over rated and detracts from the simplicity of this elegant statement of revision. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum