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Three Poems Woven together With A Single Thread

Intent

Words like
Intentionality
gather around,
tightly circling sharks
with the smell of blood
written all over me,
and if I have nothing
left to barter & sell
or even give away
like an organ donation,
useless to the dead,
it's just because intent
turned itself
inside out and uses me
the best way it knows how:

when
I pour salt into my own wounds,
and I light up the sky.


Pawn Shop

How we keep finding one another
is no mystery,
some things like
massive grey elephant hides with
parchment ivory tusks and African ears,
bats with submarine or airplane sonar,
Vampire teeth and arm-chair wings,
are musical instruments,
if anything,
tuning forks of vibrations
in the manifestations of how God
plays the show like a stand-up comic,
steals all the good scenes and
winks in every detail,
hiding behind a dark pawn shop curtain
as you bring in the ticket
to buy back your soul.


Shine


Darling, if you bring your empty cup of passion,
I'll bring you my song of joy, my body of ecstasy,
we'll meet in the golden catherdral
of falling leaves,

we'll make love until hell freezes over
we'll melt the sun, the fields of clover,

we'll die in one embrace
like all Lovers should,
beneath the stars, on the way to a
distant Alleluia
like burning crosses of wood,
like an echo
in a quiet Mosque,
like Venus and Mars,

we'll shine,

we'll shine.



— Kailashana, Apr 03, 2008

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professor

professor

18 years 2 months ago

Do the best things in life come in threes?

Ok Anna despite your comment that i would not want to be inside your mind when it is in creative mode you are sucking me in all the same. All three of these are great to read but very different. The first one very descriptive of someone who's impoverished control over their life has rendered them subject to predators. No matter how many times i read it though i can't stick the last three lines back onto the main text (even with my surgical skills), they read like an amputated limb...i guess i must be doing something wrong. The second is full unadulterated free-flowing Anna with a myriad of images thrown in (I think "Vampire teeth and armchair wings" should be put together as a line). Not quite sure why a stand up comic would "wink in every detail", "drinks" may be. lol. The pawned soul in the last three lines is great. As for the third there is great passion here although the "hell freezes over" is a little cliched. Sounds like you are equating sex and religious experience as well...i must have been going to the wrong place when i tried it...sex i mean. lol. Anyway I enjoyed my voyage of experience through your leaping creative mind and look forward to the next installment. Keith
professor

professor

18 years 2 months ago

I'll risk it Anna

....well i am a few thousand miles away so my appendages are probably reasonably safe. lol. Ah that continental Roman Catholic hangover. I was married to an Italian for 25 years so i know all about it believe me. Looking forward to the next installment so hope your boredom threshold has been exceded. Does open Sesame work when you are in between a rock and a hard place? Salute Keith
whitetea

whitetea

16 years 3 months ago

Pawn shop reminded me of a

Pawn shop reminded me of a quote from the book fight club "It's a bridesmaid's dress. Someone loved it intensely for one day, then tossed it. Like a Christmas tree -- so special, then, bam -- it's abandoned on the side of the road, tinsel still clinging to it. Like sex crime victims, underwear inside-out, bound with electrical tape."
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Dalton

15 years 11 months ago

i wonder what your real name

i wonder what your real name is, to look out for you on the bookshelves, they don't print poetry as beautiful as this. john x