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IKnowNoBox
Mar 31, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Rigged Prank

guided from one grand cathedral
pall bearers with wheel barrows
appear to move as if by frame

candy tinted days behind us
secular knowledge secreted
unsharable from such slumber

grip fixed on our humiliates
now fodder for misinterpretation
or one final chuckle all around

— IKnowNoBox, Mar 31, 2008

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 2 months ago

Hello,

Favorite line: secular knowledge secreted I'm greedy, I wanted more. Always, Cat
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 2 months ago

Thank you I have been studying the art of deception

I turned to poem for a summary of what I found so far,that people are definable/classifiable by how easily they admit they where duped.Every trivial/psuedo thing we carry out of this life could hold us back some how.But upon leaving it would be nice to leave a punchline that others will uncover after you departed. In ink, Dabbler
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 2 months ago

eeew post-modernism

only joking, it as the line "appear to move as if by frame "that did it Love the poem, cheers, Jess
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IKnowNoBox

18 years 2 months ago

Thanks Jess

I have witness the frame by frame effect.Questioning things as they unfold in still motion. It is how I detect fraud some times images over lap.There is a potential for fun interventions using the same "vision". In ink, Dabbler