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the prophet

I met a prophet
his long hair stringy and matted
eyes full of conviction
he told me he rode but bore no colors
jesus came to him in a vision
but he could only see his sandals
I met a prophet
he told me his prophecy would be fufilled
the virgin of guadalupe told him so
out back in the shed at a hells angels bar-b-que
he said she was coverd in roses
I met a prophet
I asked him what this prophecy was
he replied
I don't know yet
crossed himself in a very catholic way
fired up his pan head
and rode in the glare of the sun
damn I thought to myself
as I trailed my hand through the cool water
of the mountain stream
why can't I have a vision

— atorn, Mar 30, 2008

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Country/Region: new mexico

Favorite Poets: leonard cohen, charles bukowski, gary nicholson

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poewriter58

18 years 2 months ago

Andrew

Your human spell check is at it again prophecy I can't find the right words to describe what reading this poem does Puts me in mind of don Quixote with a dash of Cohen Chrys
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 2 months ago

Have you read Carlos

Have you read Carlos Castaneda's "The Teachings of Don Juan: A Yaqui Way Of Knowledge?" It also reminds me of don Quixote, as Chrys said, but a cross between Castaneda, Quixote and "Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenence." Some very good writing here. Always, Cat
atorn

atorn

18 years 2 months ago

zen

zen is a great book i tend to lean more towards the tao of pooh and the teh of piglet myself lol thanks cat
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 2 months ago

Hey..

maybe it was a vision...great writing..loved the pan-head..oh yea this is a good one here...