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Mar 30, 2008
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A Drunkards View
Enticed on entering:.... ByAvailing neon signs,Through half open doors;.... MutedAre the sounds-Mellowed into one,Vision dancing, to oblique-Star like crystals; ……..Vaporising, The air thickened; …..Rimmed,Like a mattress; …… tinged,With a blue hue; …. AcidityDrawn to; …….. Eyes, nose, and throat, Couple’s conversant, in titillation,Others way-laid with;... Intentions,Which are so very blue, Slumped across table’s,Lay the forgotten few, Their gods, standing; …. Ranked,Like soldiers; optically mounted,Waited on,To be served too,Slaves still standing,Waiting to be succumbed,To their masters intoxication, Perfusion, of voice’s; …Mixed, - with,The clinking, of empty glasses, bottles,Which were once; …….Majestic gods,Promises aired; ……… cocktailed;With lies and deceit,Forgiveness, - given;Until the next drink, Horrified, mortified,Dragged to their feet,The slaves, poisoned,By their masters, fleeced,Of their saving,The bell rings; …. And,The barman shouts,“Last Orders Please” ~~~~~~~~~~ The End.
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poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
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rider68
18 years 1 month ago
Hi Chrys
poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
Peter
poewriter58
18 years 1 month ago
Peter
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks Chrys
rider68
18 years 1 month ago
Thanks Gary