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Stop Light From This Audio Perspective

 I have to glance about a bit more cautious to pay attention to things  I cannot hear anymore .Those silent easily seen over e-cars.Now don't get me wrong I like to save the environment and the possibility of a quiter community will be welcomed yet now we need to assure that drivers know they cannot be heard and the pedestrin will need something in the transition from the sound of thunder under a hood to a silent whisperer that weighs 2000 pounds.
— IKnowNoBox, Mar 27, 2008

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 1 month ago

I get your point

Never thought about it before. So it works at that level. Love the last line. Please, please, please put a space after your commas, it's driving my inner OCD up the wall, silently. The rule is a space after, not before commas and stops, ok? Did you know that getting hitting by a Great White Shark in full attack mode is the same as getting hitting by a 2000lb car, with teeth, going 30mph? cheers, Jess