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Mar 23, 2008
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Jacobin Paranoia
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warmth envelops
dissolving the
bustle and noise
liquid stillness
offers but a momentary
tranquil once upon a time
it is so easy to
drift off and forget
here the watery balm
soothes celiac rashes
a moment's reprieve
that shuts out reality
provides sombre retreat
cares float away
until unwanted thoughts
stray with blistered report
it is quite possible
through bolted locks
to lay victim
to home invasion
for someone to play
Corday to one's Marat
a hapless victim stabbed
at home in one's bath
`
warmth envelops
dissolving the
bustle and noise
liquid stillness
offers but a momentary
tranquil once upon a time
it is so easy to
drift off and forget
here the watery balm
soothes celiac rashes
a moment's reprieve
that shuts out reality
provides sombre retreat
cares float away
until unwanted thoughts
stray with blistered report
it is quite possible
through bolted locks
to lay victim
to home invasion
for someone to play
Corday to one's Marat
a hapless victim stabbed
at home in one's bath
`
— crypticbard, Mar 23, 2008
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Critiques
purplemoondoll
18 years 2 months ago
liquid stillness offers but
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
Visions of the French
Frederick Kesner
18 years 2 months ago
Right on!
professor
18 years 2 months ago
Bathtime will never be the same!
whitetea
18 years ago
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