Wings of Fire

I would have used wolverine cries but that is me and you beautifully describe the background of the cover for my new book lol nice job of writing on this one very descriptive but then I would expect nothing less from you of all people and we both know why pushy aren't I lol Chrys

You certainly brought me there! Did you mean to use: and bending touch upon shadowy touch? Nicely written~Janice

nicely doen and loved the visual... Thank you! LadyTheresa

and love your poem. You just don't get the brave, adventurous stuff elsewhere that you get here. Somehow this feels Japanese to me, despite its length, it uses lanscape to evoke powerful emotion, great work. cheers, Jess p.s. I didn't forget to vote, who did?

Not only the imagery but your crafting of such a wonderfully written and executed piece of poetry. Carry on poet! Theresa

you know you are one of us. poet and comment as a member of this community as you are. cheers, Jess

You have such an effortless flowing style Cat that i get swept along with your craft. In truth though despite hinting at much and definitely evoking an emotional response it does not actually say a great deal. Not that it particularly matters, the word and mind play alone are impressive.I think I agree with Chrys about "wolverine" rather than "wolfen"...or perhaps "lupine" if you want to be unusual. The repetition of touch in the lines below (and shadow and shadowy)should perhaps be avoided: "And bending touch Upon shadowy touch" may be something like: "And bending touch dark-fingers the ground" Always Keith

Just one misspelled word...ballad should be ballard LadyT

This is so very good. Like a true craftsman, moulding verb’s & nouns To form poetic bliss, for all For all time I bow for you Respectfully Peter

My Darling friend this is beautiful ... I cannot gush enough its simply brilliant i cannot show you just one line I love them all , write more of these please I loved this one ... I am breathless its just beautiful ... Love Jayne x x

Just read this. What a beautiful piece of poetry. You put me right there in the desert, with its underlying stillness and watchful quiet, even as the sand and wind and animals all sing. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race

Congratulations on evolution my friend I am home for the night woot lol so glad to see you here ... big smiles from down under :) much Love and Hugz Jayne x x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...